Thread:Sophieej025/@comment-36836718-20201010160254

Thanks for helping with adding missing information. But please pay more attention to grammar (especially punctuation) and formatting. You usually use too many commas in places where they don't belong and you often remove headings of following sections which messes with the formatting of the whole page. If you need help with editing, I am willing to help. I cleaned up several of your edits but it's getting a little time consuming... once again thanks for helping with missing information. 